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Agnes

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CHAPTER 3

Chapter 3 – The Widow’s Smile

The gates of the Emecheta estate creaked open to admit the first group of mourners. Not family—journalists, stylists, two clergymen, and a senior representative from the Lagos State Governor’s office. They came not to mourn but to be seen mourning.

Journalists, clergymen and stylish mourners enter the Emecheta estate through its gates.
A public show of grief

Agnes Emecheta was trending.

Mourners check phones showing Agnes's portrait as news of her death spreads.
Everyone was watching

Chuka stood at the top of the marble staircase, sleeves rolled up, tie loosened. He looked like a man who had signed up for a honeymoon and received a funeral instead. Behind him, servants moved like whispers—carrying trays of tea, setting down condolence books, ushering guests toward the memorial portrait set up in the center of the lounge.

An exhausted Chuka watches from the staircase as servants prepare the condolence reception.
A honeymoon turned to mourning

It was a black-and-white photo of Agnes taken last year: soft lighting, her chin slightly raised, smile warm and proud.

A black-and-white portrait shows Agnes smiling proudly at her memorial.
Agnes’s public smile presides over the mourners.

“She looks kind,” someone said softly.

A mourner studies Agnes’s memorial portrait with quiet sympathy.
The public image seems kind.

“She wasn’t,” Amaka replied without turning.

Amaka replies without turning toward the mourner.
Her response cuts through the polite condolences.

She emerged from the hallway in a high-neck black gown, hair wrapped in a silk scarf, eyes hidden behind dark sunglasses. Her gait was composed. Even graceful. Not too heavy. Not too light. Just enough to remind everyone this was her mother, and she was still in control.

Amaka emerges from the hallway in black mourning clothes and sunglasses.
Her composure keeps the room at a distance.

Uju, who hadn’t spoken to her directly since the wedding, stepped forward.

Uju steps forward to greet Amaka at the condolence visit.
After their silence since the wedding, Uju approaches.

“You’re holding up,” she said gently.

Uju gently tells Amaka that she is holding up.
She offers a cautious word of comfort.

Amaka nodded. “I don’t have the luxury of falling apart. Not yet.”

Amaka nods and explains that she cannot fall apart yet.
She keeps her composure under the weight of the visit.

“I’m here if you need anything.”

Uju offers to help Amaka with whatever she needs.
Her support is gentle and tentative.

“Thank you.”

Amaka briefly thanks Uju.
The exchange remains measured and restrained.

They embraced briefly. Too briefly.

Amaka and Uju share a brief restrained embrace.
Their embrace ends almost before it begins.

Chuka watched the moment from across the room. He saw something shift in Amaka’s jaw—something tight—and wondered again about the night before. When they’d gotten home from the hospital and she refused to speak. Just showered. Changed. Slept like nothing happened.

Chuka watches Amaka and Uju from across the lounge.
Her carefully controlled expression unsettles him.

Now, she was taking visitors like a dignitary, exchanging measured words and handshakes. It unnerved him.

Amaka receives a visitor with a measured handshake as Chuka watches.
Her controlled hospitality feels strangely official.

Detective Musa, meanwhile, wasn’t at the estate. He was downtown, hunched over a monitor in the State CID’s digital unit. The Emecheta estate’s CCTV had over 50 hours of footage for the past three days. All encrypted.

Musa examines the estate CCTV files in the State CID digital unit.
The encrypted recordings demand a closer look.

“Anything from the reception area?” he asked the tech specialist.

Musa asks the specialist about the reception footage.
He narrows the search to the reception area.

“Still processing. But we found something from the staff corridor. Two hours before the collapse.”

The specialist tells Musa about footage from the staff corridor.
A recording from before the collapse offers a lead.

On the screen, a man in chef whites stood alone, talking into a phone. Another entered—short, slightly stooped, in waiter’s uniform. They argued. Then parted.

A CCTV monitor shows a chef and a short waiter arguing in a staff corridor.
The recording catches an exchange before the collapse.

Musa leaned in. “Get me the names.”

Musa leans toward the monitor and asks for the men’s names.
He wants identities for the faces on the recording.

“We’re cross-referencing staff photos now.”

The specialist cross-checks the staff images.
The men in the footage are being identified.

“Also find out which one served champagne to the bride’s mother.”

Musa asks who served champagne to the bride’s mother.
He links the staff footage to the drinks service.

“Yes, sir.”

The specialist acknowledges Musa’s instruction.
He agrees to check the champagne service.

As Musa waited, his phone buzzed. Private caller.

Musa notices an incoming call on his phone.
An unknown caller interrupts his wait.

He answered. “Detective Dauda.”

Musa answers the private call beside the workstation.
He identifies himself to the caller.

A woman’s voice. Low. Nervous.

Musa listens to the nervous voice on the line.
The unseen caller speaks cautiously.

“You don’t know me, but I used to work for Madam Emecheta.”

Musa listens as the caller describes her former employment.
She says she once worked for Agnes.

“Go on.”

Musa quietly encourages the caller to continue.
He gives her room to explain.

“She ruined my life. And I know others she hurt too. If your investigation is real… there are things you need to know. About what that woman did behind closed doors.”

Musa absorbs the caller’s allegations with a troubled expression.
She says there are more people Agnes harmed.

Back at the estate, Amaka stood before her mother’s portrait, silent, until the room thinned out.

Amaka stands before the memorial photograph as the lounge empties.
At last, the room grows quiet around her.

She removed her glasses and stared at the photograph.

Amaka removes her sunglasses and studies her mother’s photograph.
Her uncovered eyes meet the carefully arranged image.

“You would’ve loved this,” she whispered. “The press. The performance. You always knew how to die well.”

Amaka whispers a bitter remark to her mother’s photograph.
She sees the memorial as another performance.

Her hand reached for the frame. She tilted it slightly, aligning it with the flowers beneath.

Amaka carefully adjusts the memorial photograph above the flowers.
Even the frame must sit at the right angle.

From behind, Chuka approached.

Chuka approaches Amaka from behind in the quiet lounge.
He breaks the silence beside the memorial.

“They said you’re giving a speech at the memorial.”

Chuka asks about Amaka’s planned memorial speech.
He tries to draw her into conversation.

“Yes.”

Amaka gives Chuka a brief affirmative reply.
Her answer is calm and certain.

“Are you sure you’re ready?”

Chuka gently asks whether Amaka is ready.
His concern meets her composure.

“I’ve been preparing for this my whole life,” she said without blinking. “She just died a little earlier than planned.”

Amaka answers with an unwavering expression.
Her certainty takes an unsettling turn.

Chuka flinched. “What’s that supposed to mean?”

Chuka recoils slightly at Amaka’s remark.
He asks what she means.

Amaka turned to him. “It means everything is moving quickly, and I need you focused. Not scared.”

Amaka turns to Chuka and tells him to stay focused.
She demands his attention rather than his fear.

“I’m not scared.”

Chuka insists that he is not scared.
His posture gives away his unease.

“You’re sweating.”

Amaka notes the sweat on Chuka’s face.
She sees the anxiety he denies.

He rubbed his palms down his trousers. “People are starting to talk.”

Chuka wipes his palms on his trousers while admitting people are talking.
The rumors are wearing at him.

“Let them.”

Amaka dismisses the rumors with a brief reply.
She refuses to be moved by what people say.

“You were the last person to speak with her.”

Chuka reminds Amaka that she spoke with her mother last.
He presses a question that makes the room tense.

Amaka smiled. It was barely there. “She was the last person to speak to a lot of people. That’s how good she was.”

A faint smile crosses Amaka’s face.
Her answer is edged with bitter knowledge.

“Is this grief or—?”

Chuka hesitates while questioning Amaka’s grief.
He struggles to name what he is seeing.

“Grief,” she cut in, “is for the innocent. I’m just… relieved.”

Amaka cuts in and admits she feels relieved.
Her words stop Chuka’s unfinished question.

“Relieved?”

Chuka reacts with disbelief to Amaka’s admission.
Relief is the last answer he expected.

“That she didn’t take me down with her.”

Amaka explains her relief with a grave steady look.
She believes she escaped her mother’s fate.

And then she walked away.

Amaka walks away and leaves Chuka standing in the lounge.
The conversation ends on her terms.

Musa returned to the estate later that evening, just as the sky turned from gold to bruised grey.

Musa returns to the estate beneath the fading evening sky.
The investigation brings him back at dusk.

He was greeted by a long line of black SUVs. Politicians had begun arriving for the official condolence visit. Musa ignored them all and went around the back, where security footage had finally been traced to a name: Tunde Akanji, a freelance server hired from a hospitality app. Fake credentials. Disappeared after the wedding.

Musa passes the line of black SUVs and heads around the house.
Official visitors arrive while he follows a quieter lead.

He found Amaka alone in the garden.

Musa finds Amaka alone in the evening garden.
She waits apart from the visitors inside.

“The champagne server,” he said. “We’ve identified him. But he’s gone.”

Musa tells Amaka the champagne server has disappeared.
The identification has produced another mystery.

Amaka turned slowly. “Gone where?”

Amaka turns toward Musa and asks where the server has gone.
She receives the news with measured curiosity.

“No one knows. He vanished two hours after your mother collapsed. Left his uniform in the changing room. No forwarding contact.”

Musa explains the missing server’s unexplained departure.
The man left no reliable way to trace him.

“Sounds deliberate.”

Amaka observes that the disappearance sounds deliberate.
Her response is cool and analytical.

“It was.”

Musa confirms that the disappearance was deliberate.
He is certain about that much.

She crossed her arms. “Then he’s your killer.”

Amaka folds her arms and names the missing server as the killer.
She presents a quick conclusion for Musa to consider.

“Maybe. Or he’s a distraction.”

Musa considers whether the missing server is a distraction.
Musa keeps every possibility open.

She raised an eyebrow. “You don’t believe that.”

Amaka raises an eyebrow at Musa’s hesitation.
She doubts that he believes his own suggestion.

“I don’t believe anything yet. Except that your mother wasn’t nearly as loved as she seemed.”

Musa questions the affection people claimed for Agnes.
His doubts now reach beyond the missing server.

Amaka gave a dry laugh. “She was very good at pretending.”

Amaka laughs dryly about her mother’s performances.
She recognizes the gap between charm and kindness.

“Was she the kind of person who made enemies?”

Musa asks whether Agnes made enemies.
The investigation turns toward old resentments.

“More like enemies grew around her. Like weeds. She was the sunlight.”

Amaka describes how enemies gathered around Agnes.
She speaks of a life that created resentment.

“Or the poison,” Musa said.

Musa offers a darker interpretation of Agnes’s influence.
His answer is brief and unsparing.

Amaka didn’t flinch. “Either way, I want the truth. I’m not afraid of it.”

Amaka says she wants the truth without fear.
Her composure holds under Musa’s scrutiny.

“Good,” Musa replied. “Because the truth has sharp edges.”

Musa warns Amaka that the truth may hurt.
He gives her one final caution.

As he walked away, Amaka’s face softened. Just for a second.

Amaka’s expression softens as Musa leaves.
For a moment, her guarded manner slips.

Then, as she turned back toward the house, her eyes sharpened again.

Amaka turns toward the house with renewed resolve.
Her guarded expression returns.

The game had begun.

Amaka walks toward the mansion with a calculating gaze.
She faces what comes next with deliberate composure.
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