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Agnes

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CHAPTER 2

Chapter 2 – The Day After

By morning, the Emecheta estate was quiet, as if the chaos of the previous night had been nothing but a bad dream. The chandeliers still sparkled. The petals still lay scattered on polished marble. But the air had changed—heavier, colder. The celebration had ended, and with it, something else. Something permanent.

The wedding lounge stands empty the next morning, with petals scattered over cold marble.
After the celebration

Amaka stood by the large bay window in the main lounge, wrapped in a white robe, untouched breakfast before her. Her gown was gone, folded neatly in a box somewhere. Her hair was out of its bridal style, cascading in soft curls down her back. She stared out at the stillness of the water behind the property, unmoving, unspeaking.

Amaka stands silently by the bay window, leaving her breakfast untouched.
Untouched breakfast

Chuka watched her from a distance. “You haven’t said a word all morning.”

Chuka speaks from across the lounge while Amaka remains silent at the window.
The distance between them

She nodded slowly. “I’m trying to hear her voice. But it’s gone.”

Amaka nods quietly by the window as Chuka watches her.
Her mother’s remembered voice has slipped away.

He took a step toward her, hesitant. “You need to eat.”

Chuka takes a hesitant step toward Amaka beside her untouched breakfast.
He urges her to eat.

“She wouldn’t want us to cry,” Amaka whispered. “She hated weakness.”

Amaka quietly recalls her mother’s hatred of weakness.
Her whisper breaks the morning silence.

Chuka said nothing.

Chuka remains silent after Amaka’s remark.
He has no answer for her.

There was a knock at the door.

Chuka turns toward a knock at the lounge door.
A visitor interrupts their silence.

Chuka opened it to reveal a tall man in a navy blue blazer, low haircut, and a serious expression. “Detective Musa Dauda,” he said. “State CID. I’m here to speak with Miss Emecheta.”

Chuka opens the door to Detective Musa Dauda.
The detective arrives to speak with Amaka.

“Mrs. Okonkwo,” Amaka corrected gently, turning to face him. “As of yesterday.”

Amaka turns to correct the detective about her married name.
She reminds him she married yesterday.

Musa nodded once. “My condolences.”

Musa respectfully offers Amaka his condolences.
His formal greeting softens for a moment.

She gestured for him to come in. “Do you want tea?”

Amaka gestures for Musa to enter and offers tea.
She welcomes the detective with composed courtesy.

“No, thank you. Just your time.”

Musa declines tea and asks for Amaka’s time.
The visit turns toward his investigation.

He sat across from her, notepad in hand. “Can you walk me through what happened yesterday—from your perspective?”

Musa sits opposite Amaka with his notepad.
He asks her to recount the wedding day.

Amaka took a breath. “The morning was beautiful. She came into my room while I was getting dressed and told me I looked like my grandmother. She gave me the pearls herself. Said they were a symbol of strength. She… she even teased me about crying during the vows.”

Amaka recalls her mother giving her the pearls.
She describes the morning before the wedding.

“And at the event?”

Musa asks about the wedding reception.
His questions move to the event itself.

“She was smiling. Laughing. Taking photos. She gave a beautiful toast. I was standing right next to her.”

Amaka remembers her mother’s happiness at the reception.
She recalls standing beside her during the toast.

“Did she eat anything special?”

Musa asks whether Agnes ate anything unusual.
He turns to the details of her food and drink.

“She didn’t eat much. But she had a glass of champagne delivered—she said she preferred brut, not sweet.”

Amaka describes the champagne delivered to her mother.
She remembers her mother’s preference for brut.

“Do you remember who brought it?”

Musa asks who delivered the champagne.
He presses for the identity of the waiter.

Amaka shook her head. “A waiter. Young. Medium build. Neatly dressed. I didn’t catch his name.”

Amaka shakes her head, unable to name the waiter.
She offers only a brief description of him.

“We’ll track the catering team. What happened after she drank?”

Musa asks what happened after Agnes drank.
He promises to trace the catering team.

“Nothing immediately. She danced a bit. Sat back down. Then she just… collapsed.”

Amaka describes the moment her mother collapsed.
Her account reaches its painful ending.

“And before the wedding, was your mother in any kind of conflict? Arguments? Threats?”

Musa asks about conflicts in Agnes’s life.
His questions turn to possible enemies.

Amaka hesitated. “People admired her, but my mother was… firm. She didn’t tolerate nonsense. She had enemies, I’m sure, but no one brave enough to try something like this. Not in public.”

Amaka hesitates before admitting her mother had enemies.
Her certainty falters for a moment.

Musa’s pen paused. “Enemies?”

Musa pauses with his pen above the notepad.
The mention of enemies catches his attention.

“Professional, not personal.”

Amaka distinguishes professional enemies from personal ones.
She carefully narrows what she means.

He looked at her. “That’s not the same thing.”

Musa challenges Amaka’s distinction between kinds of enemies.
He holds her gaze as he replies.

Amaka smiled sadly. “With someone like her, it is.”

Amaka answers with a sad, knowing smile.
For her mother, the two kinds of enemies overlapped.

Musa studied her a moment. Calm. Collected. Her voice trembled at just the right times. But there was something distant about her sadness—more polished than raw.

Musa studies Amaka’s carefully composed sadness.
The detective considers the distance behind her grief.

He flipped the page in his notepad. “I’ll need a list of all close associates. Business partners. Staff. Anyone who might have had access to her food or drink.”

Musa turns a notebook page as he requests a list of associates.
He asks who could have reached Agnes’s food or drink.

Amaka nodded. “I’ll have someone send it to your office.”

Amaka nods and agrees to send the list.
She promises to have the names sent to his office.

“Thank you.”

Musa briefly thanks Amaka for her cooperation.
He acknowledges her promise.

“And, Detective…” she said, leaning forward. “I want you to know—I will cooperate fully. My mother was everything to me. I need to know who did this.”

Amaka leans forward and promises full cooperation.
She tells Musa she needs the truth about her mother.

Musa closed his notebook. “We’ll find out. You have my word.”

Musa closes his notebook and gives Amaka his word.
He promises that they will find out what happened.

Later that afternoon, a makeshift press tent was set up outside the estate gates. Journalists had already begun spinning theories. Some whispered heart attack. Others pointed fingers at the groom’s family. One popular blog claimed Agnes had been cursed at her village shrine last year and the effects had finally caught up. None of it mattered to Amaka. She stayed inside, serene, unavailable.

Journalists gather beneath a makeshift press tent outside the estate.
Speculation spreads while Amaka stays inside.

By evening, the autopsy report came in.

Musa takes the newly arrived report from its envelope.
By evening, the autopsy findings have reached him.

Toxicology confirmed it was poison—cyanide, likely introduced in a drink, fast-acting, undetectable without chemical testing. It had been a small dose, expertly timed. Whoever administered it knew exactly what they were doing.

Musa reads the toxicology findings in his parked car.
The report confirms a deliberate poisoning.

Musa read the report in silence in his car, parked just outside the Emecheta estate. He rolled the window down, letting in the salt-heavy breeze from the lagoon. He’d seen a lot in his 15 years with the force—ritual killings, jealous lovers, inheritance wars—but this felt different.

Musa reads quietly with the car window lowered beside the lagoon.
Something about the case feels different.

This wasn’t spontaneous.

Musa reflects on how carefully the death was planned.
This was no spontaneous act.

It was surgical.

Musa recognizes the precision behind the killing.
The method was cold and exact.

He looked up at the mansion again. The estate was too quiet for a place that had seen nearly four hundred people the day before. Too still. As if something inside was watching and waiting.

Musa studies the unnaturally quiet estate from his car.
The silent mansion seems to hold its secrets.

He made a call. “Get me the guest list, the catering contracts, and the CCTV files from the estate security. I want to know who went in and out of that drinks area in the thirty minutes before Agnes Emecheta dropped dead.”

Musa calls for guest records and the estate’s security footage.
He orders a closer look at access to the drinks area.

“And the daughter?” the voice on the other end asked.

Musa listens as the caller asks about the daughter.
The question turns toward Amaka.

Musa looked toward the upper balcony.

Musa looks toward the empty upper balcony while on the phone.
His attention returns to the house.

“Leave her,” he said. “That woman’s heart is broken. She’s not part of this.”

Musa tells the caller to leave Amaka out of the inquiry.
He believes her grief rules her out.
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