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Agnes

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CHAPTER 15

Chapter 15 – The Woman Who Knew Too Much

Amaka sat across from Oluchi Nwankwo in the private sitting room, the air between them taut like a drawn bowstring.

Amaka and Oluchi sit facing each other tensely across a tea table.
A taut silence

“You should have stayed gone,” Amaka said, pouring herself tea.

Amaka pours herself tea while staring coldly at Oluchi.
A cold reception

“I stayed gone long enough to know what you became.”

Oluchi speaks firmly across the tea table to Amaka.
Oluchi names the change she sees in Amaka.

Amaka stirred slowly. “Then you know I don’t respond well to threats.”

Amaka slowly stirs her tea while warning Oluchi.
Amaka answers with controlled menace.

“I’m not here to threaten you,” Oluchi replied. “I’m here to remind you.”

Oluchi calmly reminds Amaka of the past across the tea table.
Her visit carries a reminder, not a threat.

“Of what?”

Cartoon illustration: Amaka asks what Oluchi wants her to remember.
Amaka asks what Oluchi wants her to remember.

“That you weren’t born of her.”

Cartoon illustration: Oluchi tells Amaka she was not born of Agnes.
Oluchi tells Amaka she was not born of Agnes.

Amaka laughed. “And yet I killed like her.”

Cartoon illustration: Amaka laughs at the resemblance in their actions.
Amaka laughs at the resemblance in their actions.

Oluchi flinched slightly at the brazenness.

Cartoon illustration: Oluchi flinches at Amaka’s brazenness.
Oluchi flinches at Amaka’s brazenness.

“You’re proud of it?”

Cartoon illustration: Oluchi asks whether Amaka is proud.
Oluchi asks whether Amaka is proud.

“No,” Amaka said, sipping calmly. “But I’m not ashamed either.”

Cartoon illustration: Amaka drinks her tea without shame.
Amaka drinks her tea without shame.

Silence stretched.

Cartoon illustration: Silence stretches between the women.
Silence stretches between the women.

“You’ve built an empire on her ashes,” Oluchi said.

Cartoon illustration: Oluchi accuses Amaka of building on Agnes’s ashes.
Oluchi accuses Amaka of building on Agnes’s ashes.

“No,” Amaka replied. “I built a shelter from her fire.”

Cartoon illustration: Amaka says she built a shelter from Agnes’s fire.
Amaka says she built a shelter from Agnes’s fire.

Across town, at the Ministry of Women Affairs, the Commissioner’s office hummed with suppressed tension. The financial report had reached her desk. Anonymous source. Clear trails.

Cartoon illustration: The Commissioner studies the anonymous financial report.
The Commissioner studies the anonymous financial report.

Four shell accounts.

Cartoon illustration: The report identifies four shell accounts.
The report identifies four shell accounts.

Minor but irregular withdrawals.

Cartoon illustration: Small irregular withdrawals appear in the records.
Small irregular withdrawals appear in the records.

All tied to the Agnes Emecheta Foundation.

Cartoon illustration: All the accounts connect to the foundation.
All the accounts connect to the foundation.

The Commissioner’s assistant knocked once and entered. “Should we call the press?”

Cartoon illustration: The assistant enters and asks about calling the press.
The assistant enters and asks about calling the press.

“Not yet,” the Commissioner said. “She’s too clean. Too loved. We’d look like vultures.”

Cartoon illustration: The Commissioner decides it is too soon to act.
The Commissioner decides it is too soon to act.

“What do we do?”

Cartoon illustration: The assistant asks what they should do.
The assistant asks what they should do.

“We wait,” she said. “Everyone slips. Even the ones in pearls.”

Cartoon illustration: The Commissioner says they will wait.
The Commissioner says they will wait.

Chuka sat at his office, staring at divorce papers.

Cartoon illustration: Chuka sits in his office staring at divorce papers.
Chuka sits in his office staring at divorce papers.

He hadn’t signed yet.

Cartoon illustration: The divorce papers remain unsigned.
The divorce papers remain unsigned.

Some days, he wondered if the silence was safer than the scandal.

Cartoon illustration: Chuka wonders whether silence is safer.
Chuka wonders whether silence is safer.

He still loved her.

Cartoon illustration: Chuka recognizes that he still loves Amaka.
Chuka recognizes that he still loves Amaka.

Or maybe he still loved the version of her he married—the one with eyes full of hope and a voice that trembled when she spoke about the future.

Cartoon illustration: Chuka remembers Amaka’s former hopefulness.
Chuka remembers Amaka’s former hopefulness.

But that woman was gone.

Cartoon illustration: Chuka realizes that the woman he remembers is gone.
Chuka realizes that the woman he remembers is gone.

Replaced by someone who didn’t tremble. Ever.

Cartoon illustration: He considers how unshakable Amaka has become.
He considers how unshakable Amaka has become.

His phone buzzed.

Cartoon illustration: Chuka’s phone begins to buzz.
Chuka’s phone begins to buzz.

A number he didn’t recognize.

Cartoon illustration: The caller’s number is unfamiliar.
The caller’s number is unfamiliar.

He answered.

Cartoon illustration: Chuka answers the call.
Chuka answers the call.

“Mr. Okonkwo,” the voice said. “We have something you might want to see.”

Cartoon illustration: A voice offers Chuka something he should see.
A voice offers Chuka something he should see.

Musa stood outside the Lagos Internal Audit Bureau, a plain folder in hand.

Cartoon illustration: Musa waits outside the Internal Audit Bureau.
Musa waits outside the Internal Audit Bureau.

Inside: printouts from the burned memory card he had recovered before Amaka got to the safe.

Cartoon illustration: The folder contains printouts from Agnes’s recording.
The folder contains printouts from Agnes’s recording.

Backup copies.

Cartoon illustration: Backup copies preserve the recording.
Backup copies preserve the recording.

Agnes's final words on record.

Cartoon illustration: Agnes’s final recorded words survive on paper.
Agnes’s final recorded words survive on paper.

She hadn’t left a suicide note.

Cartoon illustration: Musa sees recorded evidence rather than a suicide note.
Musa sees recorded evidence rather than a suicide note.

But she’d left enough paranoia behind to fuel a thousand questions.

Cartoon illustration: Agnes’s suspicions leave Musa with many questions.
Agnes’s suspicions leave Musa with many questions.

And Musa was ready to ask them all.

Cartoon illustration: Musa prepares to pursue the questions.
Musa prepares to pursue the questions.

Back at the estate, Oluchi rose to leave.

Cartoon illustration: Oluchi rises to leave the estate.
Oluchi rises to leave the estate.

“I came here thinking I’d speak to a daughter,” she said. “Instead, I met a fortress.”

Cartoon illustration: Oluchi says she expected a daughter and found a fortress.
Oluchi says she expected a daughter and found a fortress.

Amaka stood as well.

Cartoon illustration: Amaka stands to face Oluchi.
Amaka stands to face Oluchi.

“I became what I had to become.”

Cartoon illustration: Amaka defends the person she has become.
Amaka defends the person she has become.

“That doesn’t make it right.”

Cartoon illustration: Oluchi says necessity does not make it right.
Oluchi says necessity does not make it right.

“Right?” Amaka laughed. “In Lagos? Power is the only thing that justifies itself.”

Cartoon illustration: Amaka laughs and declares that power justifies itself.
Amaka laughs and declares that power justifies itself.

Oluchi shook her head. “She made you into her.”

Cartoon illustration: Oluchi believes Agnes made Amaka into her likeness.
Oluchi believes Agnes made Amaka into her likeness.

“No,” Amaka said coldly. “I made myself into the woman she feared.”

Cartoon illustration: Amaka claims to have become the woman Agnes feared.
Amaka claims to have become the woman Agnes feared.

As Oluchi left, she passed Mama Tutu in the hallway. The old housekeeper gave her a brief nod—half-respect, half-warning.

Cartoon illustration: Oluchi passes Mama Tutu in the hallway.
Oluchi passes Mama Tutu in the hallway.

And then Amaka was alone again.

Cartoon illustration: Amaka is alone again after Oluchi leaves.
Amaka is alone again after Oluchi leaves.

She walked to her mother’s old mirror and stood there.

Cartoon illustration: Amaka stands before her mother’s old mirror.
Amaka stands before her mother’s old mirror.

Not brushing her hair.

Cartoon illustration: Amaka leaves the hairbrush untouched.
Amaka leaves the hairbrush untouched.

Not adjusting her makeup.

Cartoon illustration: She does not adjust her makeup.
She does not adjust her makeup.

Just staring.

Cartoon illustration: Amaka simply stares at her reflection.
Amaka simply stares at her reflection.

And for the first time, the reflection looked tired.

Cartoon illustration: Her reflection begins to look tired.
Her reflection begins to look tired.

Not broken.

Cartoon illustration: Her gaze remains unbroken.
Her gaze remains unbroken.

But tired.

Cartoon illustration: But the exhaustion remains.
But the exhaustion remains.

At the CID office, Musa received the photos Chuka had been sent.

Cartoon illustration: Musa receives the photographs sent to Chuka.
Musa receives the photographs sent to Chuka.

Grainy screenshots from security footage—likely leaked from a member of the kitchen staff.

Cartoon illustration: The images are grainy kitchen security screenshots.
The images are grainy kitchen security screenshots.

A still frame of Amaka handing a waiter a small white envelope.

Cartoon illustration: A still shows Amaka handing a waiter a white envelope.
A still shows Amaka handing a waiter a white envelope.

Not Moses.

Cartoon illustration: The waiter in the image is not Moses.
The waiter in the image is not Moses.

But close.

Cartoon illustration: The photograph brings Musa closer to the truth.
The photograph brings Musa closer to the truth.

Musa squinted.

Cartoon illustration: Musa squints at the evidence.
Musa squints at the evidence.

Then called the lab.

Cartoon illustration: Musa calls the laboratory.
Musa calls the laboratory.

“Run a frame analysis on all kitchen footage from the morning of the wedding. I want every movement tracked. Every handoff. Every interaction. Timeline them to the second.”

Cartoon illustration: Musa requests a frame-by-frame analysis of the wedding footage.
Musa requests a frame-by-frame analysis of the wedding footage.

“Still chasing ghosts?” the tech replied.

Cartoon illustration: The technician asks whether Musa is still chasing ghosts.
The technician asks whether Musa is still chasing ghosts.

“No,” Musa said. “I’m finally catching one.”

Cartoon illustration: Musa believes he is finally closing in.
Musa believes he is finally closing in.

That evening, Amaka received a message.

Cartoon illustration: That evening, Amaka receives an anonymous message.
That evening, Amaka receives an anonymous message.

No name.

Cartoon illustration: The message has no sender name.
The message has no sender name.

No number.

Cartoon illustration: There is no number to identify the sender.
There is no number to identify the sender.

Just one line.

Cartoon illustration: Only a single line appears on the screen.
Only a single line appears on the screen.

The mirror is cracking. You might want to look away.

Cartoon illustration: The message warns that her carefully held image is cracking.
The message warns that her carefully held image is cracking.

She stared at it for a full minute.

Cartoon illustration: Amaka stares at the message for a full minute.
Amaka stares at the message for a full minute.

Then deleted it.

Cartoon illustration: She deletes the message.
She deletes the message.

Then walked upstairs.

Cartoon illustration: Amaka walks upstairs.
Amaka walks upstairs.

Then took a hammer from the bottom drawer of her mother’s closet.

Cartoon illustration: She takes a hammer from the bottom drawer.
She takes a hammer from the bottom drawer.

And smashed the grand mirror into jagged dust.

Cartoon illustration: Amaka smashes her mother’s grand mirror.
Amaka smashes her mother’s grand mirror.
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