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Agnes

By Oluwasegun Soyinka

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CHAPTER 13

Chapter 13 – The Fracture Line

The city was waking up, but the Emecheta estate remained cloaked in silence.

The Emecheta mansion lies quiet behind its gates while dawn breaks over Lagos.
Silence behind the gates

Chuka hadn’t slept. He paced the living room like a man rehearsing a confession—or a confrontation. The walls felt tighter now. The photographs heavier. The woman upstairs increasingly unfamiliar.

A sleepless Chuka paces past family portraits in the mansion living room.
A sleepless confrontation

He looked at the portrait of Agnes by the staircase. The one she’d had commissioned after being named “Businesswoman of the Year” in CityScope Magazine.

Chuka studies Agnes’s portrait beside the staircase.
A familiar portrait becomes unsettling.

He’d once believed her smile was genuine.

Chuka studies the smile in Agnes’s portrait with growing doubt.
The smile he once trusted feels different now.

Now he wasn’t so sure.

Chuka studies Agnes’s portrait with growing doubt.
Her familiar smile no longer reassures him.

Upstairs, Amaka wrapped a silk scarf around her hair and studied herself in the mirror. Again.

Amaka wraps a silk scarf around her hair and studies her reflection.
Amaka wraps a silk scarf around her hair and studies her reflection.

Every day she checked for cracks. But none had appeared.

Amaka checks her composed reflection for signs of strain.
Amaka checks her composed reflection for signs of strain.

The call came just before 8 a.m.

A call arrives just before eight in the morning.
A call arrives just before eight in the morning.

A familiar voice.

Amaka recognizes the voice on the line.
Amaka recognizes the voice on the line.

Musa.

Amaka recognizes Musa as the caller.
Amaka recognizes Musa as the caller.

“Moses is alive. He’s safe. He’s talking.”

Amaka hears that Moses is alive and safe.
Amaka hears that Moses is alive and safe.

Amaka said nothing.

Amaka responds with silence.
Amaka responds with silence.

“You tried to end this quietly, but I’m still here. Still watching. Still listening.”

Amaka listens to Musa say he is still watching.
Amaka listens to Musa say he is still watching.

She stared at her reflection.

Amaka studies her reflection during Musa's warning.
Amaka studies her reflection during Musa's warning.

“You’re good, Amaka. But you’re not untouchable.”

Musa warns Amaka that she is not untouchable.
Musa warns Amaka that she is not untouchable.

Then a click. Line dead.

The call ends abruptly.
The call ends abruptly.

She placed the phone down slowly.

Amaka sets the phone down slowly.
Amaka sets the phone down slowly.

Her heart did not race.

Amaka remains outwardly calm after the call.
Amaka remains outwardly calm after the call.

Uju was at the airport.

Uju reaches the airport.
Uju reaches the airport.

Backpack. Sunglasses. No makeup. No forwarding address.

Uju travels with a backpack and sunglasses.
Uju travels with a backpack and sunglasses.

She stared out the terminal windows as planes sliced through the sky.

Uju watches planes through the terminal windows.
Uju watches planes through the terminal windows.

Her phone buzzed. One new message.

A new message interrupts Uju at the airport.
A new message interrupts Uju at the airport.

Amaka:

Uju recognizes the sender of the message.
Uju recognizes the sender of the message.

“No matter where you go, you’ll always know. And that’s enough.”

Amaka's message unsettles Uju before departure.
Amaka's message unsettles Uju before departure.

Uju deleted the message.

Uju deletes Amaka’s message at the airport.
Uju deletes Amaka’s message at the airport.

Boarded her flight.

Uju boards her flight out of Lagos.
Uju boards her flight out of Lagos.

And cried the moment the wheels left the ground.

Uju cries as the aircraft leaves the ground.
Uju cries as the aircraft leaves the ground.

At the station, Musa took Moses’s official statement.

At the station, Musa records Moses’s official statement.
At the station, Musa records Moses’s official statement.

It was clean. Consistent. Detailed.

Moses gives a clear, consistent account.
Moses gives a clear, consistent account.

It was also useless—on its own.

Musa recognizes that the statement alone cannot prove the case.
Musa recognizes that the statement alone cannot prove the case.

He had motive, opportunity, even a confession of being used.

Moses acknowledges how he was used.
Moses acknowledges how he was used.

But no hard evidence tying Amaka to the actual act of poisoning.

Musa finds no hard evidence connecting Amaka to the poisoning.
Musa finds no hard evidence connecting Amaka to the poisoning.

No vial. No video. No voice recording.

The file contains none of the missing physical evidence.
The file contains none of the missing physical evidence.

She hadn’t needed to do it with her own hands.

Musa sees that Amaka needed no direct hand in the act.
Musa sees that Amaka needed no direct hand in the act.

She had done something far more dangerous:

Musa considers the more dangerous nature of the manipulation.
Musa considers the more dangerous nature of the manipulation.

She had orchestrated belief.

Musa understands how Moses’s trust was manipulated.
Musa understands how Moses’s trust was manipulated.

Back at the estate, Amaka found Chuka waiting for her in the sunroom.

Amaka finds Chuka waiting in the sunroom.
Amaka finds Chuka waiting in the sunroom.

“I made tea,” he said. “Figured we might actually need it this time.”

Chuka tells Amaka that he has made tea.
Chuka tells Amaka that he has made tea.

She sat without responding.

Amaka sits without answering.
Amaka sits without answering.

He poured into two cups. Steady hands.

Chuka pours tea with steady hands.
Chuka pours tea with steady hands.

“You look like her more every day.”

Chuka says Amaka resembles her mother more each day.
Chuka says Amaka resembles her mother more each day.

Amaka blinked. “You say that like it’s a curse.”

Amaka asks why the resemblance sounds like a curse.
Amaka asks why the resemblance sounds like a curse.

“It is. For me.”

Chuka admits the resemblance is a curse for him.
Chuka admits the resemblance is a curse for him.

A silence settled.

An uneasy silence settles between them.
An uneasy silence settles between them.

He leaned forward.

Chuka leans forward to confront Amaka.
Chuka leans forward to confront Amaka.

“Did you kill her?”

Chuka asks Amaka whether she killed her mother.
Chuka asks Amaka whether she killed her mother.

Amaka tilted her head. “Why ask if you’ve already made up your mind?”

Amaka answers the accusation with a question.
Amaka answers the accusation with a question.

“Because I need to hear it. From you.”

Chuka says he needs to hear the truth from her.
Chuka says he needs to hear the truth from her.

“I didn’t pour the poison,” she said.

Amaka says that she did not pour the poison.
Amaka says that she did not pour the poison.

“But you made it happen?”

Chuka asks whether she caused the murder.
Chuka asks whether she caused the murder.

“I ended a war that started before I could speak.”

Amaka claims that she ended a lifelong war.
Amaka claims that she ended a lifelong war.

“She gave you everything.”

Chuka insists that Agnes gave Amaka everything.
Chuka insists that Agnes gave Amaka everything.

“No,” Amaka replied, voice low. “She gave me nothing but chains dressed as diamonds.”

Amaka rejects his account of her mother’s generosity.
Amaka rejects his account of her mother’s generosity.

Chuka stared at her for a long moment.

Chuka stares at Amaka in silence.
Chuka stares at Amaka in silence.

“I want out.”

Chuka tells Amaka that he wants out.
Chuka tells Amaka that he wants out.

She didn’t blink. “Then go.”

Amaka calmly tells Chuka to go.
Amaka calmly tells Chuka to go.

“You’re not going to fight?”

Chuka asks why she will not fight for him.
Chuka asks why she will not fight for him.

“I don’t fight people who’ve already surrendered.”

Amaka dismisses Chuka’s surrender.
Amaka dismisses Chuka’s surrender.

He stood, took the untouched tea, and poured both cups down the sink.

Chuka pours both untouched cups of tea down the sink.
Chuka pours both untouched cups of tea down the sink.

When he left, she didn’t follow.

Chuka leaves, and Amaka does not follow.
Chuka leaves, and Amaka does not follow.

She simply exhaled.

Amaka lets out a slow breath after Chuka leaves.
Amaka lets out a slow breath after Chuka leaves.

And whispered, “One less loose thread.”

Amaka whispers that one loose end is gone.
Amaka whispers that one loose end is gone.

Musa reviewed the entire case file that night.

That night, Musa reviews the entire case file.
That night, Musa reviews the entire case file.

All 198 pages.

The case file fills a thick stack of pages.
The case file fills a thick stack of pages.

He rewrote his summary three times.

Musa rewrites his case summary for a third time.
Musa rewrites his case summary for a third time.

At the center of it all was a woman with no blood on her hands, but fingerprints on every detail.

Musa reflects on Amaka’s influence over every detail.
Musa reflects on Amaka’s influence over every detail.

A daughter who mourned on schedule.

Musa considers how carefully Amaka controlled her mourning.
Musa considers how carefully Amaka controlled her mourning.

A killer who never needed to touch the knife.

Musa recognizes that the killer needed no direct weapon.
Musa recognizes that the killer needed no direct weapon.

He closed the file.

Musa closes the case file.
Musa closes the case file.

Wrote a single word on the last page:

Musa adds one final word to the last page.
Musa adds one final word to the last page.

“Untouchable.”

The final note captures Musa’s bleak conclusion.
The final note captures Musa’s bleak conclusion.

Then locked it in the cabinet.

Musa locks the case file in the cabinet.
Musa locks the case file in the cabinet.

And walked out of the office.

Musa leaves the office after locking away the case file.
Musa leaves the office after locking away the case file.

The next morning, Amaka was announced on Good Morning Nigeria as the official Ambassador for Women’s Legacy Funds—an initiative she had lobbied for herself.

Amaka is introduced as an ambassador on morning television.
Amaka is introduced as an ambassador on morning television.

She gave an interview.

Amaka begins her television interview.
Amaka begins her television interview.

Warm.

Amaka presents a warm public face.
Amaka presents a warm public face.

Sincere.

Amaka speaks with apparent sincerity.
Amaka speaks with apparent sincerity.

Tearful at all the right moments.

Amaka sheds tears during the interview.
Amaka sheds tears during the interview.

She spoke about Agnes with reverence. About family. About forgiveness.

Amaka speaks of Agnes, family and forgiveness.
Amaka speaks of Agnes, family and forgiveness.

The host cried. The audience applauded.

The host cries while the studio audience applauds.
The host cries while the studio audience applauds.

By noon, the clip had gone viral.

By noon, Amaka’s interview is circulating online.
By noon, Amaka’s interview is circulating online.

Meanwhile, Moses disappeared again.

Moses quietly leaves the safe house.
Moses quietly leaves the safe house.

Voluntarily this time.

Moses chooses to disappear of his own accord.
Moses chooses to disappear of his own accord.

Left a note for Musa:

Moses leaves a note for Musa.
Moses leaves a note for Musa.

“She wins. I want to live. Please don’t find me.”

The note asks Musa not to look for him.
The note asks Musa not to look for him.

Musa read it twice.

Musa reads Moses’s note twice.
Musa reads Moses’s note twice.

Folded it once.

Musa folds the note once.
Musa folds the note once.

Then burned it over his office sink.

Musa burns the note over his office sink.
Musa burns the note over his office sink.

At dusk, Amaka stood before her mother’s grave.

At dusk, Amaka stands before Agnes’s grave.
At dusk, Amaka stands before Agnes’s grave.

She wore black again, not for mourning, but for clarity.

Amaka wears black with cold resolve.
Amaka wears black with cold resolve.

“I thought you would haunt me,” she said.

Amaka tells the grave that she expected to be haunted.
Amaka tells the grave that she expected to be haunted.

“But you don’t.”

Amaka says that Agnes does not haunt her.
Amaka says that Agnes does not haunt her.

She reached into her bag and placed a final item on the headstone: the same vial she’d handed to Moses weeks ago. Emptied. Cleaned. Useless.

Amaka places the empty vial on the headstone.
Amaka places the empty vial on the headstone.

Beside it, she set the last page of her private journal:

She places the last page of her journal beside the vial.
She places the last page of her journal beside the vial.

“To be born of a monster and become a mirror is not destiny. It’s design.”

The final journal page records Amaka’s chilling conclusion.
The final journal page records Amaka’s chilling conclusion.

She stepped back.

Amaka steps back from the headstone.
Amaka steps back from the headstone.

Lit a match.

Amaka lights a match.
Amaka lights a match.

Watched both burn.

Amaka watches the page and vial in the flames.
Amaka watches the page and vial in the flames.

And as the fire hissed against the wind, she smiled.

Amaka smiles as the small fire flickers in the wind.
Amaka smiles as the small fire flickers in the wind.

The past was ash.

Only ash and the remains of the burned evidence are left.
Only ash and the remains of the burned evidence are left.

And the future belonged only to her.

Amaka looks ahead with quiet confidence.
Amaka looks ahead with quiet confidence.
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